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Joca was an alligator who was very smart.
But I suspect that Joca was not that smart.
One day, Joca woke up with a terrible toothache.
Alligator with toothache?
It is for you to see, even alligator has a toothache.

The pain was terrible. Joca was rolling back and forth.
If trying to eat:
_ Aiaiaiaiaiaiaiai!
_ Hurt so much
If you try to drink:
_ Uiuiuiuiuiuiuiui!
_ How it hurts.
Joca was desperate, did not know what to do, and even began to cry.
Alligator also cry?
It is for you to see, even alligator cries when he feels a lot of pain.
That's when I showed up.
I, the Tooth!
But tooth speak?
It is for you to see, what we do not do to help a friend.
But back to the story, I jumped out of the mouth of Joca and gave him a sermon:
_Tá With toothache?
_Well done!
Joca looked at me with a face: "I do not understand anything!"
_ You are my tooth? Question Joca.
Then I said
_ Yes! I'm your tooth and came here to make a complaint!
_ You do not take care of us!
Joca made a face of dull, that we do when we did something wrong.
_ But what I did to deserve this ... aiaiaiaiauiuiuiui .... doooooooor. He said Joca moaning in pain.
I said:
_ Joca, you are not taking care of your teeth!
_ I did not understand! He said Joca perplexed.
_ I like a lot of things.
So I said:
_ Yes, and we help. Cutting, tearing and crumpling all this food, but what I mean is that you just eat, eat, eat ...!
_ AND NOT TAKE CARE OF US!
I said, crying.
Teeth is also angry?
It's for you to see. Even tooth gets mad sometimes
but back to the story ...
I said:
_ Do you know who walks strolling in your teeth?


_Bactérias, Tartar, cavities!
The gang of evil will slowly opening holes and ruining their teeth.
Joca was a beast and shouted:
_ WHERE THEY, WHERE ARE THEY? He tells me I caught them all. I am very smart and I will end this evil guys!
_ Good! _I talked
_ You have nothing smart Joca. He is leaving these villains do away with us!
_ Know Joca, these enemies of the teeth are not big guys.
_ NOOOOO ??? He said Joca surprised.
I continued...
_ Are pequeniniiiiiiiiinhos microscopes!
_ You can not see us, but they are there, gnawing teeth without stopping!
'But what can I do to stop these monsters? Oops! Little monsters? He asked Joca beseeching.


_ It's easy, Joca! Just call the guys well. Super friends of teeth!
And tooth has many friends?
It's for you to see.
Even teeth have super friends, but going back to the story ...
_ This class is unbeatable!
_ Oh yes? And who are they? Tell me, tell me! very curious Joca said.
clarified:

_ The first is the dentist!

_ I tell you, this is the guy!
He cares, treats, clean and always keeps teeth healthy and gives you legal tips to take care of teeth and loves to receive your visit. But sometimes we forget to go frequently. The ideal and visit it every six months!
'But where I find one of those? Asked Joca.
_ Ah! Is easy! I refer you a great also have dentists girls are so beautiful! ...
I mean...
Careful!
I continued:
_ But have more friends as well!
_ Has the unbeatable trio!
I think until we are the three musketeers, like ...
One for all!
And all for One!
That gives one arrives over there in the bad guys!
_ IT IS? And who are they? He asked the curious Joca.
_ Dona Brush Your Toothpaste and Your Dental Floss!
Never separated, enjoy working in teams.
Every day, after meals they get into action!
I continued:
_ Dona Brush and Your Portfolio sweep and clean all the dirt they encounter on the road, leaving teeth clean, bright and with a taste ... booomm!
_ But what his wire? Asked Joca.


_ Ah! It completes the service, cleaning in difficult places, between teeth, where Dona brush and Your Portfolio can not enter.
_ It Alligator, with the Three Musketeers and his friend Dentist (or girlfriend), there is no crowd of evil to resist. Your teeth will be amazing, or I'll be liiiiiiiindo!
Finished.

_ Wow! I liked the tips! said Joca
So I said goodbye:
_ That's it, get going! Take care alligator!
And Joca interrupted me:
_ Thanks! Wait! You said you'd show me a dentist!
_ Of course!
(Shows the dentist's card)
_ Hello! Please, this is Joca, the alligator, I make an appointment!

But alligator go to the dentist?


It is for you to see, even alligator go to the dentist.

Is that you??
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1 hour ago, minerva56 said:

I suggested one'power alligator as he told the story and how would power

Uhm you should focus on explaining and giving details instead on your power suggestions rather than giving a long story. 

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5 hours ago, Defiance said:

Please read on how to suggest a power.

 

 

 

3 minutes ago, minerva56 said:

you can give me a hand to give the details to the power

You can check what Defiance linked to you. Check the guide on how to suggest a power. 

 

But like for example giving a details of what exactly the name of the power suggestion, how the power would function, is the suggestion just only a smiley power or does it have a hug too, what's the power's pawn would look like, etc...

 

Although we have a list of animal powers that have been suggested in here already. 

 

 

 

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34 minutes ago, minerva56 said:

you can give me a hand to give the details to the power

 

19 minutes ago, 6 said:

But like for example giving a details of what exactly the name of the power suggestion, how the power would function, is the suggestion just only a smiley power or does it have a hug too, what's the power's pawn would look like, etc...

 

Here's my ideas I came up with :$. Yeah, they're pretty bad...

 

smilies: alligrin, alliwink, allilazy (or allisleep), allibite, allisnarl, allimad, allisplash, allilips (licking lips)

pawns: snapping jaw, large footprint, regular pawn with scaly skin, alligator eye

hug: alligator lurking in the swamp and then eats the other person's pic, then the message comes up

description: 'Snappy smilies.'

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3 minutes ago, Crow said:

 

 

Here's my ideas I came up with :$. Yeah, they're pretty bad...

 

smilies: alligrin, alliwink, allilazy, allibite, allimad, allisplash

pawns: snapping jaw, large footprint, regular pawn with scaly skin, alligator eye

hug: alligator lurking in the swamp and then eats the other person's pic, then the message comes up

(y)

 

I thinking of a different hug..maybe a person walking in the woods and fell down on the swamp followed by your custom message(like shouting for help) and then suddenly the alligator appeared and eats the person and swimmed back deep in the swamp. LOL

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Right now, you have a very interesting story, but you should add more about the power. You could say something like "Alighappy, aligsad' 'aligtail' 'aligmouth' and some pawns could possibly be:

 

 hat#ha - Aligator tail 

 

 hat#hc - Aligator 

 

 hat#hl - Zoo tickets ? 

 hat#ho Possibly another smilie.

You could say something like "Alighappy, aligmouth" "the aligtail" the aligsad "and some pedestrians that powers will be added and hug the alligator to see his friend and coming to the dentist opened my mouth and have teeth to sample the hug would have 3 types the creation is poe mihay account these abraco

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